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Tuesday, 10 April 2018

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Hundreds of lifeless corpses litter the ground, their smashed up parts everywhere.
One by one the bodies are lifted up and disposed of, their dignity died with them.
“What the hell Bob!” Jerry shouted as the watermelons rolled out of the yellow van.
“Im sorry Jerry, I didn’t know You forgot to put in the stopper”
“ Don't make this about me Bob, this is your mistake” “ I hate you Jerry!”
“ I hate you Bob”. Just like the watermelons, Bob and Jerry’s friendship has been smashed to pieces.
They start to pick up the melons and put them in the rubbish, there is no use for them now.
Will Bob and Jerry’s friendship be fixed?

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1 comment:

  1. Love it - the lifeless corpse watermelons and the comparison to a friendship. It really made me stop & think

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